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Write emails that prospects read with advice from Nate, Jamal & Chris
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Daily Sales Newsletter November 26, 2024 |
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In todayâs issue:
Jamal Reimer: Executive email framework
Chris Orlob: 4 ways to fix your cold emails today
Jason Bay: Cold email editing prompt
Nate Nasralla: Revive stalled deals with this email
Executive email framework
Jamal Reimer shares an email formula he used to start and close a $50M deal.
Itâs built to grab executivesâ attention and compel a response by using three key elements:
Mention someone they know
Reference a peer, board member, or direct report to create credibility.
Address a relevant project or pain point
Highlight an initiative or challenge theyâre responsible for.
Include a numbers-based business outcome
Use data to demonstrate the measurable impact of your solution.
Example email:
Subject: Project Wheelhouse
Chris,
I had a conversation with one of your board members, Jane Smith. She mentioned Project Wheelhouse as the initiative where COMPANY NAME will address its challenges with production demand forecasting.
From what I understand about your current production volumes, our technology could reduce production surplus/deficit by 40%-80%. Weâve seen similar results with three of your industry peers in the past twelve months.
Iâve attached a 1-page document with more detail.
Would love the chance to discuss Project Wheelhouse and how we may be able to add value.
Best,
Pro tips:
Have the email come from a peer executive (you can ghostwrite it).
Use their first name only (no âDearâ or âHiâ).
Keep it under 5 sentences since theyâre likely reading on their phone.
Include the senior personâs name or project in the subject line.
Executives will respond if you hit the right pain points with clear, concise communication.
Revive stalled deals
Nate Nasralla explains how to rebuild your Q4 pipeline by reviving stalled deals with a simple 3-step process and email framework:
Identify stalled deals
Look at deals that ended with no decision but showed promise.
Focus on those where the champion was just as frustrated as you when the deal didnât close.
Draft an executive summary
Review notes or call transcripts from those deals.
Create a concise summary of the key takeaways and missed opportunities.
Tools like Fluint can help speed up this process.
Use this email framework
Subject: Exec Summary
"Been a minute since we last spoke, [First Name].
I was just thinking about [their internal priority] â is this still top of mind?
If so, I built out an exec summary for you, based on where we left off.
I've got an idea to build on this together, too, based on our work with [peer].
Maybe we can catch up on this sometime?"
4 ways to fix your cold emails today
Chris Orlob provides 4 key tips for writing cold emails that get replies.
Here's how to make your emails stand out and improve your response rates:
Write short, emotional subject lines
Treat the subject line like an adâit should grab attention and tap into emotion.
Use verbs at the start (e.g., âAvoid,â âBeat,â âStopâ) and make it feel like an internal email.
Examples:
"Avoid expensive mishires"
"Beat [Competitor]"
"Stop losing engineers"
Articulate their pain better than they can
Your opening sentences should show a deep understanding of their struggles.
If they feel like youâve described their problem better than they could, theyâll trust you have the solution.
Write as if youâve read their journal.
Keep it to 4-5 sentences
Be ruthless with editing. Every word must earn its place.
Imagine you get paid $100 for every unnecessary word you cut.
Each sentence should serve one purpose: to get them to read the next one.
Make it easy to say yes
Use simple calls to action (CTAs) that donât require big commitments.
Avoid hard asks like "Got 30 minutes?" or "Want a demo?"
Instead, try:
"Want to hear a success story?"
"Interested in hearing more?"
"Up for a quick chat?"
TO-GO
Brian LaManna: A framework, to personalize emails quickly
Marcus Chan: 7 soft CTAs that work
Will Allred: You should be banking on clarity
Yurii Veremchuk: How to follow up effectively
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